I like this. Definitely the right direction. Please make the banner a little smaller so the two lines of the title are closer together (about half the distance it is now). Keep the banner centered on the top of the laurels like you have it now. That is, with the point of the top leaf pointing to the center of the banner where the angle changes. Finally, can you make the font the same as was used inside the circle? That is, slightly narrower and bolder? Thanks. Great job.