This is also very solid. And I totally get what you are trying to do with it. here is what I like about all of your designs
- I like that you show the book
- i like the clean nav layout
- I like the big video player
Here ar emy nitpicks:
- I love the red background but the image of the book gets lost in it. I see why you first did a blue background.
- Another competitor has a kickstarter widget which showed the progress of the campaign! Can you incorporate that?
- So this is not what the "Build your brand" page should look like. Its more of a blog style. Can I see what that looks like?