Foreword for relationship guide book

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Hi, thank you for your entry. I have not yet decided the layout of the book. Would you be able to create a more generic foreword?

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     coolsravan2000

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     I think I should make changes in the couple aspect of foreword

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     Penganjur Peraduan

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     I don't mind how you wish to position it, perhaps just a removal of where things are based. i.e. "the first chapter..." could become "in one of the chapters...". The first two lines do not sit entirely right with me. Perhaps something similar to "This book is designed to enable you to build better relationships with loved ones through understanding the consequences and impacts of your interactions and behaviours...". I do really like your commenting on having read the book and the way it made you think though, a lovely touch.

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