I need an animated lyric music video for an upcoming rap song

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  i think the some sentences can be broken down a bit further. The format of the video is like I asked so I'm happy with that. I like that the background looks alive and that you've even included a fade out for the track. so -
  
  try to break down the sentences further, it doesnt only have to be one sentence on screen at a time. Explore a different effect for the lyric transitions, perhaps a shadow on the album arts corners to make it pop out from the background

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     JeanCastroM

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     and if i leave the sentences like that, only each word appears in 1 time?

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     JeanCastroM

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     tell me on the chat so we can discuss more

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  JeanCastroM

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  I did this for sentences, because it makes it easier for people to read and understand, but if you want me to change, just tell me

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