I believe the About Us section could be made more accessible to the reader with some very careful editing. Several points are duplicated elsewhere on the flyer so no information will be lost. It may even benefit from being presented as a bulleted list. With today's busy lifestyles potential customers are far more likely to absorb a list of concise points rather than a large block of text. Proof reading and copy correction are services I offer separately but I'll be happy to include them here for free. Please forgive me for duplicating this information on my other entries - I just wanted to make sure it was read.