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Hello! I fixed what you said about page /why-video-brochures. I although added new redesigned page /what-is-a-video-brochure. And I have questions about /features. I see, that there are infirmation that dublicates on "what-is-a-video-brochure" and "features", Maybe it will be better to remove it from one of the pages?

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  • dprinting
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    I would like to see a brochure that is open so people can see the the screen, buttons, etc. I would like to see arrows pointing to the screen, buttons, usb port, etc and have text saying what these features. Use: video_brochure_4.3 inch screen_red

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    1. dprinting
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      I like your suggestion and understand why you are suggesting it...but, I think that the features are also important to have in the 'what is a video brochure' page because it does explain what it is...do you not agree (still)?

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    2. KateTsibulnyak
      KateTsibulnyak
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      Okay, you're boss, we will leave them if you think it's necessary. But then I propose to locate on page http://videoprints.net/what-is-a-video-brochure/ only icon, feature name and ONE general sentece about it. And on pages "features" we will leave full information about them. How about it?

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  • dprinting
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    Thanks. These icons really need to be more colorful icons.

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    1. KateTsibulnyak
      KateTsibulnyak
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      1) I used text 14px, so it shouldn't be too small.

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    2. dprinting
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      ok. Thanks

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  • dprinting
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    For the other pages, I really want the headers to include a graphic which points to different features on the brochure and lists the features (buttons, screen usb, battery....) so it is very very very very easy for someone to see what makes these items different. Similar to header in Features page, but just alot less ugly :)

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  • dprinting
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    This is a bit better, but I still don't think it pops too much. What would you think of something similar to the 'music' mock up that you have in your portfolio as direction? Let me know if you think it is too much.

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  • dprinting
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    Hi again. Good point. On the page: http://videoprints.net/what-is-a-video-brochure/ there are 2 sections at the bottom that duplicate eachother. Those 2 at bottom can be deleted. However, I need the 2 pages to include the selling point since they explain what is included in brochure

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