In a project like this, I think readability is key. If it looks like there's too much text on the page, no one really wants to read it. I also think some of the steps can be condensed a bit to further that purpose. :) I made a change to the line which said Ï personally like..". As a company, it's more professional to give a recommendation than to give a personal opinion. Let me know what you think of this design and I'd be happy to make any necessary changes. Looking forward to hearing from you!