This entry is not an entirely new version. All I did was take your original copy and make some changes to be more beneficial for you. The paragraphs contained poor sentence structure, grammatical errors, and a few punctuation mistakes that needed fixing. I revised the entire text to make sure that it conveyed the whole point to the reader. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you like how the copy has turned out, and you have planned content that requires additional work. I wish you to have a great deal of success both in this project and in your future ones.