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The 21-Day Elimination Diet

sir, kindly judge the article. if it needs anything to change ,please inform me. waiting for your feedback.

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  • aashitppaul
    aashitppaul
    • 2 bulan yang lalu

    thank u sir for your clear suggesting. i am editing the article.

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  • drcoryoldham
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 2 bulan yang lalu

    I like your tips that you've given.. I'd like a little more emphasis on the fact that this is a "21-Day elimination diet" to help reduce inflammation so that they can get their lives back

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  • drcoryoldham
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 2 bulan yang lalu

    Thank you for your entry!! I'd take out the line "for curing inflammation we use powerful medicine.."
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    I'd say something like "the conventional way that our society has taught us to 'treat' inflammation is with medicine that has incredibly dangerous side effects, which often outweigh any potential positive."

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