Apple-ize our site

Status: Closed
Prize: $100
Entries Received: 10

Contest Brief

We want to have our website rewritten to give it an Apple/inviting feeling. We already know what to say, but just not how.

We would like to start with our new landing page, and if done successfully, continue with more pages.

Basically we have three small paragraphs of text (max 50 words per item) that have to rewritten in one coherent voice.

We also need two/three inviting lines for the signup forms.

In short, we want to move away from being too technical and focus more on benefits/emotions.

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SJasonDutta
- 10 years ago
Please rate my entry, i.e., #12 .
- 10 years ago
anujbatham94
- 10 years ago
I will soon submit my entry
- 10 years ago
nrobertson25
- 10 years ago
So just to clarify, are you looking for three paragraphs of 50 words each?
- 10 years ago
1. Contest Holder
  - 10 years ago
  yup
  - 10 years ago
deelrahim
- 10 years ago
Please check #2
- 10 years ago
AlexanderWrites
- 10 years ago
Great! I'm already working on my entry. I'll submit it as soon as possible. Thank you.
- 10 years ago
HKPatel7
- 10 years ago
Hi accounting8, do you have the website address so we can see the content that needs to be rewritten? Or maybe you could upload a text file/PDF we can download? Oh, and how long should the new version be? Thanks.
- 10 years ago
1. Contest Holder
  - 10 years ago
  max 50 words per item, we have uploaded the brief
  - 10 years ago
Contest Holder
- 10 years ago
HI, we just uploaded the brief!
- 10 years ago
upasakdey
- 10 years ago
sir where those 3 paragraph ?
- 10 years ago