Design a Logo for Luxury Wedding Garden Farm Retreat - ongoing work available

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Design a text based logo, with icon, for Tree Elle Retreat to use on our website, social media, business cards, signs and wedding stationery.

Think elegant, classic with a twist of french. Something that works well on invitations for garden weddings.

TEXT - Tree-Elle Retreat
FONT - Think ELLE magazine for recognition. I've attached a snippet of a banner that was made for us. Try a mix of this font and cursive with lines/embellishments.

ICON - Think luxury two storey houses, stunning formal gardens, weddings, ornamental and fruit trees. We also have farm pets - sheep, alpacas, geese, turkeys and chickens.
We love the StoneBarn Logo (attached) but they are a close competitor so must be different whilst evoking the same feeling. It has a great font and the icon is a clever concept teaming the house shape with a filigree tree.

Dropbox link available with logo ideas. Feel free to ask for any further information.

EDIT - please see additional files added for inspiration.

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  • Amalbasti
    Amalbasti
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    check my work .. https://www.behance.net/gallery/37998599/logo

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  • kgardner
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    #108 I really like this tree. See below comments for text

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  • kgardner
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    #106 Thank you for including the elements but this does not reflect our brand.

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  • kgardner
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    #101 #102 The house between the trees is a great idea. The house needs to have straight sides and the trees need to be fuller or more decorative. For the text look at #75 for Tree Elle and #98 , #85 or 74 for the Retreat.
    #103 I really like the house in the tree can the window be changed to our 3 - see latest attached file. See font options we prefer above.
    #104 #105 The text is great but the icon is not what we are looking for.

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  • kgardner
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    Please see added file for house shape

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  • kgardner
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    #100 I like the added texture you have given Tree-Elle and the house and tree icon. The Retreat is too small

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  • kgardner
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    #99 Have a look at the 4 str entries for our favourite fonts. The tree is a nice style but needs to also reflect accommodation, weddings and beautiful gardens.

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  • kgardner
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    #98 - I really like this one. Could be a bit too close to StoneBarn but I really like it. What do the other designers think? Is this too close?

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  • kgardner
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    Thank you for your entry
    #95 Wrong name and wrong style
    #96 Great trees and got the name right, missing the - between Tree and Elle. It would be better with the windows and dot removed. #97 Not our style at all, great for a bamboo hut but not for us.

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  • kgardner
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    #94 Very clever icon. Needs a - between Tree and Elle. The window could be removed and changed to our 3 picture windows and doors - I will add the file.
    Here's a link to a shot from a guest https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10203574056896624&set=o.312311502118690&type=3&theater
    Or Barnhouse https://www.facebook.com/TreeElleRetreat/photos/a.321724991177341.99399.312311502118690/700826273267209/?type=3&theater

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  • kgardner
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    #90 Another great submission. Thank you so much. I like the text in this one even though Retreat isn't in a script/cursive font. I prefer the simplicity of your icon in #75

    #91 #92 #93 Unique icon idea but not suitable for us. The Retreat in #92 is closest to what we want.

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  • kgardner
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    #89 where did this one go?

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  • kgardner
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    #86 I really like this one. The house within the tree is great and the tree makes for a nice circle shape. Could we see it without the embellishment on the tail of the R in Retreat? Also can we see it in different colours - using our wilderness green and deep red/maroon?

    #87 #88 Thank you for providing us with a different idea. I prefer the ELLE magazine font style. Very good idea though - just not for us.

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  • kgardner
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    #83 Tree-Elle is good - the rest looks too Irish to me. We are green but not the Irish way.

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  • kgardner
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    #82 The "Tree-Elle" is perfect, I don't like the Retreat font. The icon is clever but too detailed for what I want. I much prefer the icon in #75
    #84 and #85 Text looks great dash (-) between Tree and Elle could be shorter. Nice icon but too detailed for our needs. I like the heart in #84 .

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  • kgardner
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    #81 #80 The Tree Elle is great. Retreat needs to be bigger to fill the gap and still be recognisable. I like the way the branches twirl almost creating hearts/filigree looking. The house shape looks more like a marquee. The trunk may be better singular instead of intertwined.

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  • kgardner
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    I have star rated the new entries and will complete the comments this evening when I am back in wi fi range.

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  • farzana1994
    farzana1994
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    check #88 .

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  • farzana1994
    farzana1994
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    check #87 .

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  • kgardner
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    #77 getting closer. Check out the new file I am loading with another idea.

    #78 #79 This is still the wrong direction. Remove the person as the tree trunk. The Retreat font is wrong. Read the many comments beow I have made or revert back to the sample attached

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  • gundarazib20
    gundarazib20
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    Check #78 And #79

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  • kgardner
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    #76 - Thank you for still trying. I really like the improvement on the Retreat and the way you are trying to make the tree work. I will add a file with some other trees and house design. Can we remove the outer leaf and circle to see if it stands out more
    Did you design the logo for http://www.treehouse-austin.com/
    I don't mind if you didn't. I appreciate the effort and work that goes into trying to make my ideas into a working graphic and really do like their logo. Many of my inspiration logos came from hours of searching the internet for others logos.

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  • kgardner
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    #66 Thank you SO MUCH. Thank you for really paying attention to what we are asking. Please see the font in #68 . That is the one I like for Retreat. If we can combine that with your layout and adding a more decorative tree to #60.

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    1. MWAngkasa
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      My pleasure.working on that.still trying to get best looking tree.but my tree is keep getting uglier.hehe

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    2. kgardner
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      Hehehe our real trees do that until they grow to perfection!

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  • kgardner
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    #75 FABULOUS. Thank you for your first entry. I really like this one. The use of the ELLE magazine font is brilliant, the oversize T and E really makes is stand out. I love the simplicity yet effectiveness of the icon. The changes I suggest would be remove the diamond between the Tree and Elle, we are trying really hard to accuntuate the dash between the two to eliminate the triple E and go to our new web address tree-elle.com . I'd also charge the Retreat font so the r is less script and more standard

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  • kgardner
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    #74 Great text - Retreat could be larger. The house shape is good and I like the blend of the arch and the small heart but sides are confusing. Is it supposed to be a tree?

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  • kgardner
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    #73 good layout of text. I like the way the Retreat sits withing the dropped T and E. The house shape is good too. The contents of the house shape don't reflect our brand. Perhaps look at the "z clever icon combining wedding and secret garden" file and work off that for inspiration.

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  • kgardner
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    #71 and #72 Thank you but please read brief and feedback. The people in the trunk and font is not fitting with our brand.

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  • kennethatienza
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    #60 is just a copy of http://cdn.rentcafe.com/dmslivecafe/3/240633/3_240633_1892661.JPG?crop=(0,0,300,130)&cropxunits=300&cropyunits=130

    It's a shame to see the top two designs in this contest are straight copies from other designs.

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    1. kgardner
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      I can't view that link either. It says access is denied.

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    2. kennethatienza
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      http://www.treehouse-austin.com/

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  • kgardner
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    #70 the filigree is much better but it no longer looks like 2 trees either side of the house

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  • robinkhan5031
    robinkhan5031
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    Please check ......#71..............#72

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    1. kgardner
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      Please read brief and all feedback on entries. The font and icon in these designs do not match what we are looking for.

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  • kgardner
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    #67 Thank you for trying the two font types and changing the birds. Our geese look more like the ones you had (swans?) with their necks making the love heart. Ours even do this!
    #68 is the best text so far. THANK YOU. The - between Tree and Elle needs to be in line with the centre of the E and the Retreat needs to be more bold. See above for birds.

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  • kgardner
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    #67 The Tree Elle is right. Thank you for looking for the Barnhouse shape. The Barn shape can be seen in file TER Logo idea Barn. The Retreat font isn't right. We like the font in #68 a little bolder so the cross bar in T stands out more. Now we are looking for a simple/unique icon to go with the wording. Something clever that captures the tree, house, wedding etc

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  • kgardner
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    #65 ABSOLUTELY Brilliant. Now is it possible to switch the fonts so the Tree-Elle is the one with the large T and E like ELLE magazine font and the Retreat is the top cursive font?

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  • kgardner
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    I'd love to know if you are all reading my comments or is there a better way tto share them with you? Is there anyone who can change the wording in the attached "TER logo font idea 4" to Tree-Elle Retreat? So Breathtaking is changed to Tree-Elle and --luxury-- is changed to --Retreat--

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  • kgardner
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    #63 #64 BRILLIANT - I like the way the tree and archway has been blended together and the birds are a great addition reflecting the animals we have. We have geese, turkeys and chickens - no swans...yet! Is there a goose that could replace the birds. I'd also like to see Retreat in cursive/script font. Ideally like the attached TER logo font idea 2

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  • kgardner
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    #62 Thank you for trying to put the tree and the house together. It's not right here though. Have a look at the attached examples which have a house shape as the tree ot the tree integrated into the text.

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  • kgardner
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    #60 FANTASTIC work on combining a tree and the house. I really like the tree with the house in the middle. Can the tree be a more filigree/tree of life pattern?
    #61 great integration of the tree and house again. The chandelier is a great idea but doesn't suit our brand. I will upload a photo of the houses to help.

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  • kgardner
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    #59 - thank you for adding something different and unique. I like how your custom Icon works on the top or to the left and can also work by itself. That is EXACTLY what I want in an icon to use for watermarks, seals, etc. The icon itself is a great concept but doesn't convey the houses, trees, garden and wedding feel we need it to. The lines either side of Retreat to add balance is exactly what I am after. I would love to see this with the ELLE style font and Retreat in cursive.

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  • kgardner
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    #58 Thank you for your submission. The Tree-Elle is great, please make the Retreat cursive with a line either side to fill in width between T and E. Thank you for combining the tree and house. I like this tree, the integration of the house is not quite right but youare on the right path.

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  • kgardner
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    #56 The Tree-Elle is close. Thank you for trying a different font for the Retreat - I am after something more cursive to reflect our weddings. The icon is too busy for what we want. Refer back to the attached files for inspiration.

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  • kgardner
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    #55 and #57 I like the text - can you make Retreat longer, bolder and a bit bigger to balance with the Tree Elle? The icon is in the right location. I want an icon that cleverly combines like the Stonebarn combines the tree with the house shape - not one with multiple components next to each other. The flower circle may work better as a leaf wreath.

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  • kgardner
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    #54 Thank you for your submission. This one doesn't work. The text is too squashed and the tree is not a representation of our luxury brand.

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  • kgardner
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    #51 I like this the best out of your 3 latest submissions. Please try Retreat in a script/cursive romantic font with a line either side to put it inline with Tree-Elle.

    #52 and #53 don't combine the tree and house well.

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  • kgardner
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    #46 #47 #48 #49 #50 Thank you for all the different colour options. Can you try with a font closer to the ELLE magazine one - sample attached - for Tree Elle with the large T and E. Shorten the Retreat to fit between the T and E in a script font like the Breathtaking one in the sample attached.

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  • kgardner
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    #45 Thank you for your entries. The positioning of the icon is good, combining elements is good too. Could you get a house shape combined with a tree rather than a person? I prefer the Retreat smaller - it looks like it has spread further than the T.

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