I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about control diet.

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  • Pemenang: MariusAlza9

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I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about my patent.
I have invention and I have been registed this patent in USPTO.
An essay about a new invention to control someone diet.
You should include these ideas:
• The importance of maintaining the number of calories consumed.
• It is difficult to prevent yourself from enjoying himself with food.
• Introducing the new invention to readers.
• How the new invention works.
• Advantages of new invention.
• The last paragraph: encourages readers to use this invention.
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((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))
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could you writ some lines about the following points.
1- this invention can be used from diabetes and hypertension Patients and other Patients they need a diet in their life.
2- why there are fingre slot in two site of the device: (it has finger opener from two side because you can use one hand to handle the food like burger and other hande for opening the device, that mean you can use your right hand for eating and your left hand for opening the device or revers that.)
3- put the picture ([login to view URL]) at the end of this essay.

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  • naefcom
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 2 minggu yang lalu

    we are now at deadline, I would thank all participate in this contest.
    all of you submitted an awesome essays, and it hard for me to choose just one essay.
    I would thank everyone personally:
    Marius A.
    Zayn R.
    Pratyush D
    Esther S.
    M J.
    noemiruizsotillo
    Joudet A.
    Devin N.
    Shikha S.
    Krishnadip D.
    Mrs Muhammad M.

    I have put some criteria to choose the winner, two major criteria (formation and content)
    formation criteria : paragraphs, lines, headlines, pictures, font.content criteria: use my ideas which I mentioned in description, your ideas you have put in the essay, the words easy to understand, the sentences comprehensive, the quality of the last paragraph.

    • 2 minggu yang lalu
    1. naefcom
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 2 minggu yang lalu

      don't worry all of you will win in this contest because I will buy all the essay in this contest despite you don't win the prize, I will offer 10% of prize for each one who don't win the prize this 10% to thank your effort in this contest, I also put 3 medals : Gold medal for the winner (prize), silver medals for the runer-up (30% of prize), bronze medale for the the third (20% of prize) and the rest (10% of prize)

      Now the result:

      The winner for Gold medal (prize) is Marius A.
      The runer-up for silver medals (30% of prize) is Esther S.
      The the third for bronze medale (20% of prize) is Pratyush D.
      The rest (10% of prize) are Zayn R. , M J. , noemiruizsotillo , Joudet A. , Devin N. , Shikha S. , Krishnadip D. , Mrs Muhammad M.

      Thank you for all of you.

      • 2 minggu yang lalu
    2. sarahmuhammad571
      sarahmuhammad571
      • 2 minggu yang lalu

      Thanks a lot for appreciation. Still I request you to give feed back for my entry.I wish I could write for you in the future too.The content I have created is SEO friendly+appealing+simple..I am very glad to have my name in your list.

      • 2 minggu yang lalu
  • pdeb85
    pdeb85
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hello! Please check my essay, entry number 10, and give feedback. Thank you!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #21 . I have rewritten it according to your latest feedback. Thank you!

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 2 minggu yang lalu

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #29 . I have rewritten it according to your latest feedback. It includes diabetes and hypertension. It also says that slots on both sides are for both left-handed and right-handed people. Thank you!

      • 2 minggu yang lalu
  • naefcom
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 4 minggu yang lalu

    also write about this: the diabetes and hypertension patient can use this device to control them diet.

    • 4 minggu yang lalu
    1. madihajunaid
      madihajunaid
      • 4 minggu yang lalu

      Feedback on #14 please

      • 4 minggu yang lalu
    2. sarahmuhammad571
      sarahmuhammad571
      • 2 minggu yang lalu

      Done my job!

      • 2 minggu yang lalu
  • sarahmuhammad571
    sarahmuhammad571
    • 3 minggu yang lalu

    Done my job!

    • 3 minggu yang lalu
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 3 minggu yang lalu

    Please check entry #24 and #25 - adjustments to my previous one

    • 3 minggu yang lalu
  • sarahmuhammad571
    sarahmuhammad571
    • 3 minggu yang lalu

    WORKING ON ...

    • 3 minggu yang lalu
  • Daswrites24
    Daswrites24
    • 3 minggu yang lalu

    Hi, please check my entry #23 . I'd like your feedback on it.

    • 3 minggu yang lalu
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 4 minggu yang lalu

    Hi, Please check Entry #22 with the adjustments you asked for

    • 4 minggu yang lalu
    1. naefcom
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 3 minggu yang lalu

      I liked your entry, because it brief and Concentrated.

      • 3 minggu yang lalu
  • naefcom
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 4 minggu yang lalu

    I want you to write about this thought:
    it has finger opener from two side because you can use one hand to hold the burger and other hande to open the device, that mean you can use your right hand to eat and your left hand to open the bage or revers that.

    • 4 minggu yang lalu
  • ShikhaSheoran
    ShikhaSheoran
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi, Kindly check entry #20 and let me know your feedback on it. Thank you!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hey please wait for me. I will submit. Thank you

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Please check #13 with my adjustments

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    No, problem. Thanks for the feedback- it enables me to make the adjustments you want.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi, Please check my essay and leave feedback. Thank you!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. naefcom
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Good work.
      could you read my feedback to Pratyush D.
      I like your essay because it's a brief but you need to put some headlines and arrange the paragraph carefully.
      you have putted all pictures nearby to each other.
      and you should put the last paragraph at the end.

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • naefcom
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    thank you so much Marius.
    fantastic essay.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. naefcom
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      I want some modification in your article:

      you just talk about obesity and the Diseases associated with obesity, could you add a paragraph talk about a perfect body and its importance for a beauty appearance and success in the life.

      In the paragraph 6: you have wrote ( a simple plastic food page) but the device will be made of paper and wood materials. ((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. MariusAlza9
      MariusAlza9
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Sure, please check my new submission to see the required modifications! Thank your feedback!

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • ailinemacabuhay
    ailinemacabuhay
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi there, please do check mine, and am willing to revise if necessary.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. naefcom
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      l liked that You have used the question to grab the reader attention at the beginning and at the end.

      could you add a pictures and puts headlines and font on your article.

      In the paragraph 2 and 3 you have just talk about obesity and how its happened but you did not mention anything about keep body fit.

      In the paragraph 5 and 7 you have used the word (cheat) and I prefer a positive expression.

      You have wrote a lot about appearance and a few about how the device work.

      in the last paragraph you need to rephrase the sentence and increase sentence to encourage the readers to use this invention.

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • naefcom
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    I will put all my feedback in public to avoid these from future writers....

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • zaynraza49
    zaynraza49
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Check Entry 8 please. Feedback will be appreciated.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • naefcom
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    I am waiting more entries until the contest finish.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Asslamau alaikum please wait for me.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. naefcom
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      ok

      • 1 bulan yang lalu

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