Kids story about a life lesson

  • Status: Closed
  • Hadiah: $30
  • Penyertaan diterima: 59
  • Pemenang: divyapreksha3

Ringkasan Peraduan

I like to have a Story written for kids - they go on adventure and learn how to win in life--- characters names are Gotta , wanna, and Win!! they go meet a Professor a Wizard Name Ewizz for some advice for life lesson-- you can use your talents to come up with one-- Thank you!!

This story is about three kids. Gotta Wanna and Win-- they go on an Adventure out to learn about the world- when they find trouble or things not going to as planned they seek advice from the Wizard EWIZZ!!! WRITE A STORY FOR KIDS TO ENJOY

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  • vksafa
    vksafa
    • 2 minggu yang lalu

    Congratulations G Divya Preksha R on your achievement. Stay blessed.

    • 2 minggu yang lalu
  • Bjacxx
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Wow!! Thanks to all of you for your stories-- they really are good--- im sorry if u didnt get high stars but i enjoyed all of them and want to say Thank you!!

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    1. IKhatib
      IKhatib
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Thank you sir

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • vksafa
    vksafa
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Dear Contest Holder, many thanks for giving this opportunity. Highly appreciate it. I'm withdrawing my entry as this extended contest is not concluding. Waiting further seems worthless as I have other similar opportunities to put my efforts. Thank you

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • MehrZai
    MehrZai
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Dear Contest Holder,
    I'm eagerly waiting for your take on Entry # 61. I've tried to keep the story basic with the moral right along its side. Hope you and all the other readers have a good read!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Bjacxx
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    I need A story for kids to enjoy-- all kids love adventures.. please read description from my details page!! Good Luck!!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. divyapreksha3
      divyapreksha3
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Sir I have written another one #60 . I have tried keeping my story and language as simple as possible for the kids to understand. This is a story full of adventures as you preferred and excitement. Thank you for this opportunity and I hope you'd take a look.

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. Bjacxx
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Thanks for doing a story ! Thank you again!

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • farhanmomen
    farhanmomen
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    I am not mentioning anyone directly, but there is a question lurking into my my mind that A Contest holder can have so many beautiful stories by just one contest and with minimum of charges, may be the contest holder of this project is not as bad as I am thinking but it happened in one contest that I recently joined. One contester made complain about being cheated. What if he takes more than one story from the talented freelancers participating here. Could we able to know about this and even if we can know what could we do against this fraud act.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. Bjacxx
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Don’t worry I’m only picking one winner. But has to be an original story:).

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • vksafa
    vksafa
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Kindly review my new entry #67. I had withdrawn my previous entry #30 as it was out of the contest theme and #66 due to some technical errors.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Bjacxx
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Please make the stories not real long-- We like them 3 paragraphs or less-- thanks for all of your help-- everyone of you!!!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. Bjacxx
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Please don’t listen to this message at all. You can make stories longer then 3 paragraphs. I’m sorry ! Don’t know what I was thinking

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. Brainarch
      Brainarch
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      thanks for your continued support of the work being done to assist in making the world a better place

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • MehrZai
    MehrZai
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hello Contest Holder, just 10 hours to go. I've added in an entry. Kindly have a look and let me know!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • farhanmomen
    farhanmomen
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    In this contest The story written by Dr. Afia was brilliant, I forgot the entry number, most probably her story has been taken already, cause it is not found here now, she deserves the prize money for sure. The contest holder also appreciated her story. But how many stories would the contest holder need actually.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • A600DC
    A600DC
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi, please take a look at my final effort - entry #58

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Bjacxx
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Thank you all for entering your stories-- im trying to make the world a better place to live in-- thanks again for all the hard work and appreciate your stories.. if u dont win -- please never give up trying to make others happy:)))

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. IKhatib
      IKhatib
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      sure sir thank u for giving us chance to express ourselves

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. Lshiva369
      Lshiva369
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Ain't that the only way? :)

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • farhanmomen
    farhanmomen
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Can I submit my story now?

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • inderriat
    inderriat
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Please check my entry #47

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • divyapreksha3
    divyapreksha3
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Respected sir, this is my first contest and I am giving my best. I hope you go through my stories, I have already uploaded 3 stories and I'm writing more. I hope my hard work would be appreciated. #29 , #36 , #39 . I have made it very colorful.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. divyapreksha3
      divyapreksha3
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Sir I have uploaded another interesting story #45 . I really hope that you will take a look. I am working on another story as well and I will upload it by tomorrow.

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • IKhatib
    IKhatib
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Sir please check entry no #37

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • IKhatib
    IKhatib
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi Contest holder I have written a short story of 3 paragraphs as you said hope you like it

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • vksafa
    vksafa
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Please check #30. Awaiting your feedback

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Zexica
    Zexica
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hello Arnab! Could you please give me a feedback about the story

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. A600DC
      A600DC
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Lastly, I thought that the children frightened of the wizard and he trying to admonish them and teaching them something in the process might not be a good approach. by default kids are innocent and curious, so invoking their sense of fear and showing disapproval from an authority figure can be counter-productive in teaching them life lessons, it is better to give a positive spin to things that they can learn from... the world is a hard enough place, no need to push them to face it and learn it before they need to do as they grow up.

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. Zexica
      Zexica
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Thank you for the wonderful advice, I did not think about it while writing, but you are right in everything. Thanks again.

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  • avirupa20
    avirupa20
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Please check #24 . Waiting for your feedback.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • avirupa20
    avirupa20
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Could you please give me a feedback about the story! I really want to write a good kid's story so if you have any suggestions I can use them and try to make it better.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. A600DC
      A600DC
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      If you don't mind inputs from a fellow writer, try to break up your writing in shorter paragraphs. Continuous writing without breaks can seem monotonous and dense, an impression you don't want to convey to your readers. Cheers!

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    2. avirupa20
      avirupa20
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Thank you so much. Appreciate your feedback :)

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • A600DC
    A600DC
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi, #22 is an updated version of #20 with some edits. Request you to consider this one as my entry instead of the previous one. Thanks. Also please share your feedback. Cheers!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • A600DC
    A600DC
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi, please check #20 . Feedback awaited.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • gagandeep8ingh
    gagandeep8ingh
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #14 is a Kids Story which teaches an important Life Lesson that 'You Don't Always Get What You Want'.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • itxnomanhere
    itxnomanhere
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Please Check #16

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • cooluser0101
    cooluser0101
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #15 A beautiful short story about kids and Professor Ewizz by me teaching an important life lesson about friendship.....

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • gagandeep8ingh
    gagandeep8ingh
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #14 is a Kids Story which teaches an important Life Lesson that 'You Don’t Always Get What You Want'.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • AmandaL53
    AmandaL53
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi there. May I know what's the word count for this story? If it's for young children, I'd imagine it to be about 1000 words or even less due to their attention span. Looking forward to your reply!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Rosedsouza03
    Rosedsouza03
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback.I'll make the required changes . Yes I actually wrote the whole story as your description was very interesting and as I wrote I got ideas. Thank you so much for the opportunity and I'll surely make the required changes so it is 100% to your liking. Thank you once again!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. Bjacxx
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Have you ever written kids stories before? or this first time

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
    2. Rosedsouza03
      Rosedsouza03
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      This is my first time

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Bjacxx
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    This story is about three kids. Gotta Wanna and Win-- they go on an Adventure out to learn about the world- when they find trouble or things not going to as planned they seek advice from the Wizard EWIZZ!!! WRITE A STORY FOR KIDS TO ENJOY@!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Rosedsouza03
    Rosedsouza03
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Greetings dear contest holder. Thank you so very much for the three stars!!! They made my day!!!Please could you tell me any changes that you would like to see so that the story meets 100% to your liking.Thank you once again!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. Bjacxx
      Penganjur Peraduan
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      you did good- I don't really like the gowawi but like the rangers. GWW Rangers would be better- also don't like the witches part--- Ewizz is the one they go to for advice on winning in life-- your story is good though. needs some cleaning up... Ewizz should live in a castle. did u write this whole story?

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • deesharma111
    deesharma111
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Can you please make it #guaranteed ?

    • 1 bulan yang lalu

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