Wanted: enticing tagline and product description for a snack

  • Status: Closed
  • Hadiah: $100
  • Penyertaan diterima: 16
  • Pemenang: advoghado

Keterangan Peraduan

Hello, we are 2 creators of a snack bar (yes, another snack bar on the market, healthy, glutenfree yada yada ... ;-)...) and we need qualified help from a great copy writer for our tagline and short product description that basically can sell the product by itself.

Please see attachment for full product description.

Name: we don't have the name yet, either. If you can come up with a name that we will end up using (after checking domain names, legal part, trademarks...) we will compensate that, of course. Feel free to mention if you have ideas for the name and how much you'd want to be compensated for that.

Further work: we will also need more copy for our website etc. so it would be great to find someone who'd we can continue with.

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  • creativeoncall
    creativeoncall
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    Miracle1212, get a professional to help you with this. At least choose one of the other starred entries. Or write it yourself – The file you attached to the contest brief was written much better than this winner. The title makes no sense in this context, yet still manages to be “icky.” The tagline was worn-out (and meaningless) 30 years ago. The description begins clumsily, then is as dry as a legal notice. All this would inspire someone to just take a vitamin instead.

    • 2 tahun yang lalu
    1. haris100
      haris100
      • 2 tahun yang lalu

      but tagline is good

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    2. creativeoncall
      creativeoncall
      • 2 tahun yang lalu

      Nah, people in the demographic they say they are targeting roll their eyes at that kind of "adspeak." But that's a less negative reaction than they'll have to the name. Any English-speaking person seeing that will say, "Eeewww, Gross!"

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  • haris100
    haris100
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    Hello miracle, was about to upload some names, will you start a contest for names?

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  • haris100
    haris100
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    Can I only submit some names? and maybe a tagline..
    what are you willing to give only for the names? I will put that price on my entry.

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  • Ranjit00
    Ranjit00
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    #71 .

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  • optimizedimage
    optimizedimage
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    How do you want to handle the name suggestion? Got a great one and it ties into the tagline and product description.

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    1. optimizedimage
      optimizedimage
      • 2 tahun yang lalu

      Went ahead and submitted the name idea because everything else falls out of that.

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  • miracle1212
    Pemegang Peraduan
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    guys, please read the briefing: it says "no use of the word healthy"...!

    • 2 tahun yang lalu
  • MrsRobeson
    MrsRobeson
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    I am unable to post in the entry my idea of your product, why not???

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    1. miracle1212
      Pemegang Peraduan
      • 2 tahun yang lalu

      I don't know, please ask Freelancer.com

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