Write me a headline to follow our Business Name

  • Status: Closed
  • Hadiah: £17
  • Penyertaan diterima: 44
  • Pemenang: greenequail

Ringkasan Peraduan

I need a clear short Headline that describes what our website/platform is for the top of our Home Page.

I will provide 3 short videos explaining what we are about.
You can visit the website and see what we are about.

The task is to write a headline so that people will understand within 3 seconds exactly what the platform is offering.

Original headline can be found on home page:

HEADLINE
Reference Pass
A good reference can be more powerful than a qualification
It's time to take ownership and possession of your something that belongs to you
Take control!

- As you can see. The website does a lot more than what is described in the headline above.

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I will know when the right message is done. Please write something that captures attention. To make it easier, I will reject those that I really don't think is true to the platform to help guide what is needed.

Thank you and good luck

Kemahiran Disyorkan

Maklum balas Majikan

“Great understanding”

Gambar Profil Rudie1, United Kingdom.

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  • Rudie1
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    There were a few suggestions made in some of your comments about suggested improvements. Those of you know who you are. I really take these comments seriously and I have suggested you message me because I may have some little jobs for you as improvement is always in my interest.

    Feel free to reach out to me.

    Thank you

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Rudie1
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    RESULTS!
    Again thank you all for your participation. I said the winner would be decided yesterday but it was so hard to narrow it down, they were mostly all good.

    We liked many of the posts and although could have said yes to some of them that were great, they were too long for a headline.

    The ones that made it hard to make a choice was the numbers 30,25, 24,22, 2,5,45, 44,40,39,37.

    Well we had to make a decision and put you all out your misery. The winner is 44.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Rudie1
    Penganjur Peraduan
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    I am so sorry guys, I had a tragic week and a half and was unable to get on here. APOLOGIES!
    I am going to check everything this evening and make announce winner in the morning.

    Thank you all for your contributions

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
    1. joyceemareelim
      joyceemareelim
      • 1 bulan yang lalu

      Hope everything takes a turn for the better. All the best to you.

      • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • savengineering
    savengineering
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    CHECK MY ENTRY AT NO 41

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • savengineering
    savengineering
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    HI

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • PenPal100
    PenPal100
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi,
    just added 2 more entries - #30 and #31 . Any feedback would be appreciated.
    All the best,
    Stefan

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • sharmasanidhiya
    sharmasanidhiya
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #26 please do check my entries and kindly go through the description

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • PenPal100
    PenPal100
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    no 23, I've given you 18 headlines. Check it out, maybe you'll like at least 1 out of 18 :)

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • Ankitaad90
    Ankitaad90
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Kindly check entry #27

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • ElizaEvert
    ElizaEvert
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    Hi. Please, look at my #21 . Please!!!!!!!

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • adarshmathew08
    adarshmathew08
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #15 and #16 I hope you like these.

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • karugathuo
    karugathuo
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #guaranteed #guaranteed

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • mamuneduc
    mamuneduc
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #3 Would you like to keep an eye on my work? I hope this catches your attention. Here are some of the best headlines that describe your reference website well.
    Good luck

    • 1 bulan yang lalu
  • simplyjohnmeta
    simplyjohnmeta
    • 1 bulan yang lalu

    #increaseprize #guaranteed #sealed

    • 1 bulan yang lalu

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