Write Strong Opening for Graduate School Admissions Essay

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I need someone to wow me with a strong opening statement or opening line for a graduate school admissions essay. The length should be a maximum of approximately 70-75 words. If you wow me with only one opening sentence, that is great as well.

The essay is already completed but I don't have an opening statement that really grabs the reader. The essay is related to Physical Therapy and embodying the American Physical Therapy Association's vision or mission statement: "The American Physical Therapy Association’s vision is: Transforming society by optimizing movement to improve the human experience"

The opening should be related to this vision/mission is some way. It should be engaging and interesting, motivating the reader to continue. Prefer US native english writers. ORIGINAL WORK ONLY. Plagiarism search will be performed on all entries.

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  • decvozza
    decvozza
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    Can we see the rest of your introduction?

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    1. loveauthor
      Pemegang Peraduan
      • 2 tahun yang lalu

      @decvozza, take a look at my reply above

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  • nwheeler88
    nwheeler88
    • 2 tahun yang lalu

    Is there any way we would be able to get a snippet of at least the first paragraph of what you've already completed? This way we can deliver the most relevant opener that will flow well into the rest of your essay.

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    1. loveauthor
      Pemegang Peraduan
      • 2 tahun yang lalu

      Hi Nwheeler88, I'd prefer not to post any portion of the essay however it is entirely about how one would embody the APTA vision. I can adjust the winning opener to easily transition to the essay/first paragraph. I'm primarily interested in the first sentence/opener versus how it connects to the next paragraph, if that makes sense. I currently open with a question (which I feel is weak, needs to be replaced), then provide the vision statement, then I have a transition line or two. My current vision statement and transition lines may remain if a winner can give a WOW opening line related to the vision, replacing my weak question.

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