Write a persuasive letter to the board of education that tells why out school studies are useless and pointed in the wrong direction and how we wont need most of it. Make MORE than one point and also offer a solution. I will provide my first draft. You may use some of the sentences in it but make the corrections the teacher said to make please if you will use it.
Use these Rhetoric devices:
Ethos, Pathos, Logos, Assonance, Alliteration, Repetition, Anaphora, Antithesis try to use all of these if not most is ok.
THIS IS HIGHSCHOOL WORK SO ONLY USE HIGHSCHOOL LANGUAGE NOTHING ADVANCED! NEED THIS DONE SOON.
In the draft i included below it says youre on to something good but you only include one point and no solution. For this include more than one use the devices and offer a solution after addressing the problem