I want to connect with people on for example Linked In and wanted to post the services we offer. I wrote a brief below but realize that its need to be correctly done to get the recipient to actually read it and call them to action
"Smart Touch Solutions has joined Laser Electrical Franchise and will now be trading as Laser Electrical Bondi. Laser brings us a back end office management system and an extensive network of 100 members in Australia.
We specialize in home automation systems, audio visual systems, lighting control, security and access control, including electrical and communications for high end residential and commercial fit out.
Our maintenance division will deliver quality and service when visiting your site for an ecofriendly energy management lamp change or electrical repair.
Talk to us about energy management from solar systems to lamp replacement cost saving solutions. We offer Free scheduled monthly visits to your business where you will only be charged if work is done."
7 freelancers are bidding on average $57 for this job
I have written lots of sales copy material for print and commercials. I can make your copy sounds engaging and provide a clear and targeted call to action for your readers. I ensure complete satisfaction.