I want someone highly skilled in marketing-speak to suggest improvements to my sales script and sales page. My product is an ebook with a natural health theme that will be sold on Clickbank.com. I'm not looking for 'slick' but a sensitive, caring, strong pull on the emotional front (as is all clever marketing I guess), and clear communication. Please show me examples of sales scripts that you have contributed to/edited. Experienced professionals only please. I estimate about 1-2 hours input is required. Additional work is available on a successful outcome to this project.