It sounds like you need a manuscript appraisal which addresses issues such as structure, dialogue, POV, theme, character development, pacing, and beginning, ending and climax points.
Alternatively, I can provide a content edit which will make suggestions on where and how to improve the writing.
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As Deputy Editor for Poetry, The Australia Times, I was responsible for the copy edit. I have copy edited several academic papers and dissertations.
Most recent novels edited:
Sharing Love. Poems by Sam, Amazon
Abduction Chronicles, Thomas Hay, Amazon
The Veil, Mitra Elli
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