Can pay $15
The story is set in London and is quite violent.
You must be a native English speaker.
Some other people have read it and liked it but one person said the end was too much and a bit to serendipitous. Anyway, would be good to know your thoughts!
It is the first episode of what would be a 4/5 episode series. I've already written episode 2.
I am a fairly experienced writer, but we all make mistakes. Happy for all feedback - don't need to sugar coat anything. Thanks
I studied Film and Theatre, majoring in Theatre at Northwestern University! I understand constructive feedback and what makes compelling TV in the industry.