DO NOT RESPOND WITH WORDS, PLEASE SEND ME THE SAMPLE FILE I HAVE ADDED REWRITTEN INTO FIRST PERSON, FROM CHARACTERS POINT OF VIEW, WHEN YOU ARE DONE SEND ME THE THE REWRITTEN VERSION OF ACT1 IF I LIKE I WILL AWARD YOU.
EXAMPLE OF WRITNG STYLE: HUNGER GAMES
1. I need 4 chapters edited and remade into (YA) young adult fantasy novel. It will be written in first person writing, i will need you take what i have written and make it a novel quality first person chapter, with out changing the plot.
2. Personality of characters should be clear through the way they think or talk in the writing.