I have the video script.
Very short. Not more than 320 words for now.
It is written in a pretty well English already. I need it re-written in the same concept. More simple, but stronger words, maybe punchlines.
I will tell you which parts I like so you can keep them.
I need someone who knows English VERY WELL.
I will need the script today, shortly .
Bidders only from Europe, Canada, Australia or USA, please. I will disregard the rest of you.
A++++ in English....