1. Do You have provocative “Hook” device? How can you make your opening more interesting?
2. Have you provided a sufficient background, familiarizing your reader with the topic?
1. What organizational plan are you using- Point/Counterpoint or a traditional argument?
2. Do you have at least two layers of development for each of your main points?
Do you have a strong and clear Thesis Statement? (What the entire essay
Topic Sentence (Main Point)
A. Supporting Point
1. Detail, example, fact or statistic
2. Detail, example, fact or statistic
B. Supporting Point
1. Detail, example, fact or statistics
2. Detail, example, fact or statistics
In the essay topic, you should try to incorporate narrative writing in one or more of the following ways:
-Tell a story or use a vivid narrative as your opening “hook” device in your introduction.
-Use narrative or personal anecdotes to illustrate your main points in your body paragraph. Often, one of the most effective ways to develop and support your ideas is to tell a story or
-Finish your essay by adding a narrative element to your conclusion. (predictions, suggestions)
1. Have you summarized your main points?
2. Are you using a “concluding device”?
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