Freelancer:
vivek11x
Some Paragraphs Rewritten
I've changed some of your early paragraphs as promised earlier, I've changed them into positive emotions and you can see that even by reading them, the reader gets quite much excited because from just those sentences we are communicating our deepest belief - that we all have the innate ability of reselience - all we need to just look back on ourself and realize what we really capable of. If you like this, I can work on more of your content down the page.