Design a Brochure for curtain and fabric company

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Thank you, I can find the private messaging service. Can you send me private message or contact me at alice@portiere......

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  rmissin

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  You express your design intentions very clearly btw ;)

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  rmissin

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  Thanks aisha, I will review your suggestions and revise the design. I posted a new revision #27 before I read this so if you see anything you like and maybe want combining between the two designs let me know.
  
  Could I just point out there is a "private message" function that I would much prefer you to use, as people round here have a nasty habit of high jacking concepts ;) I wasn't sure if you were aware it was there.
  
  thanks again.

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  (continued)
  
  Some text is centred below the pics whilst some isn't, keep it consistent. Long text on the sides could possible be indented less on left and right so it runs down the page more, instead of it staying at the top.
  
  Top left picture, move it more to the left so i can see more of the pleat and round eyelet
  
  I love the shape borders around the images, maybe make them that peach colour.
  
  Another idea I had and I don't know if this will damage the design, but I thought of having more of those thumnail images with the shaped border on the bottom of the back page, to show some of the other fabric designs. Fitting maybe 5 or 6 thumnails. Let me know if this doesn't make sense.

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Hi, your design is the best so far however there are a few things I would like to see different. Can you submit another concept like this one with improvements? You now the big circle inside that is a mocha/brown colour, can you make that circle using a close up of one of the linen fabrics? and then the inner circle can be a highlighted/darker version of this. Does that make sense?
  
  Picture on number 2 (style), can you move it up so you see more of the curtain header and less of the pole.
  
  The text seems somewhat disjointed, I'm not sure how you would change it but it needs improvement on the placement of it. For example, the "All pret-a-portiere products come with a 6 year warranty' part could maybe be in capital letters and have a white transparent background all along the bottom of page and and text in a darker colour. perhaps do the same thing with the text at the top.
  
  to be continued next msg...

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