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A little feedback on your kickstarter campaign

I think it would help if you posted a video of yourself talking about what you want to achieve. To give an insight into the people behind the scenes. Furthermore, it is kind of confusing what the main goal is. You explain on how you intend to lower my light bill, but in my opinion, your explanation is over simplified. I have a hard time picturing how this will be implemented. If i have a hard time picturing how this will work, you can bet all your potential backers will too. Furthermore, does this have a name? at the moment all i see is a slogan. p.s. the main logo at the top is too big. It is kind of overbearing and hurts my eyes. Maybe shrink it down a little bit. It also looks unusual that the top and bottom of the circle is cut off. (of your logo) Maybe revise to show the complete circle. If you need anymore feedback you know where I am. I would also consider using more professional formatting. i.e. titles same folt and size throughout. etc. Regards, Kosta Krontiris

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