Create a Book Cover from my Concept

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Some more thoughts on the grass, I really like the animals shadows, so be sure not to darken it too much. Since the light is coming from the front of the grass, maybe it should darker toward the bottom. Thank you.

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Looking at the bear a little longer, I think his body and arms are out of proportion to his head. Could you make his body less fat and wide. His arm is a little too long as well. On bull, could you tone down his muscular definition (like on his spine)? I think their heads are perfect :)

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  I don't want you to worry too much about the text because that's easy to change, worry more about the illustration.

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     juanitofu

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     Fine, Thank you!

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  This link is to the first few pages of it and you'll see a title page.

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Try this: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B0gKF9_0bnq3ODZIenBBSHA3c28

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  Just a few more thoughts on the grass to help you see what I mean. As I look at the image, the grass just doesn't quite fit. It's too plastic looking and shiny. You are very good at what you do. Thank you again for your work.

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     juanitofu

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     Ok. No problem, I can make the grass look a little bit more darker to fit with the scene. Do you have in mind a specific text I can use as reference for the title? It woul be helpful to me. Please send me a link to the example here on the comments. Thanks

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  Penganjur Peraduan

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  This is really great! This continues to go in the direction I want. I'm excited to see how you build this out. What I would do is simply expand the grass and stars to create the full picture for the dust jacket. As far as changes (1) the text needs to be more sophisticated. The book is a professional book and I want the title to look like it is classy. (2) the grass isn't quite the right color of grass during the night time, it's too bright. Don't go too far though, I like that you can tell it's green. Lastly, when you make the full dust jacket, the "GreenStar Press" logo that will go on the spine is green. Feel free to change the color to black or white - a green logo on green grass probably isn't going to work.

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