Landing Page Sales Letter - Alternative Car Fuels

Can You Make a killer sales copy! Theme is Alternative Fuels for Vehicles, Green , Eco. I know this might not be your area of expertise but I hope You prove me wrong. Sales copy for my landing page needs fixing up. I want to get a high impact sales copy that glues the visitor to the screen and stands out. you may find current landing page in .pdf format here [login to view URL] Important points I would like you to follow and understand - understand how to grab attention and invoke readers emotions - have the reader immediately identify him/her self with a dilemma a problem, where he/she thinks “OH MY GOD that sounds like me-it sucks-What can I do about it??? ??"Tired Of High Gas Prices, Worried about scorching the Earth with your emissions? ??" Are You causing Wars over Fossil Fuels with Your Gas Guzzlers? something like that - Be unusual even controversial and provocative - try to create a solution to the problems - try to project them into a better tomorrow - Create Hope - Create Cause of Urgency - Create a Clear Call to Action! - Encourage Fear ( high gas prices, high food prices, wars, global warming, polar bears dying, soldiers dying , political isolation and what not) - Appear as Unbiased Authority ( we are expert in the field, we build systems, 98% others are scammers selling free info that doesn’t work , who never open a hood, we tried them all and all suck or are dangerous and hard to implement so we decided to create a our own guide which is proven, easy, guide__something like that J ) Looking forward to Your Reply with your qualification, rate and time frame. regards, Adis