Professional degree in HRM

I have done this coursework but i failed it due to some issue that was identify on the attach feedback. please i need some one to work on the feedback given. NOTE:One of the attached is the feedback ,he said i have to make it clear as possible that i have covered the points raised in the feedback,he suggested having subheadings and breaking it down focusing on the points,he said the work was too theoretical which was very good but i have to demonstrate how they work in the organisation. please this is due on the 3rd of jan. 2013. please do not bid if you cannot meet up with the deadline....thanks.