Hello, i've modified the sentences. Mostly the tenses. Again couldn't do it extensively because of some assignments. Most of the values are formalities in the above figure but leg me know what if theres anyghing I can do.
Thank you.
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Here it is
Act 1:
I opened my eyes, slowly absorbing the morning sunlight. The warmth of the sun, penetrating through the cracks in the barrel, warmed my fingers. I could feel the hardwood pressing against my bare hands as the boat rocked. I pushed my back against the barrel and tried to make room for my legs to move. The lack of space evoked my dreaded enemy, the omnipresent suffocation, stifling claustrophobia. Unlike my previous seizure, this one was much worse: my throat felt clogged, I tried to breathe deeply. But the smell of raw fish refused me this luxury. Bile rose in my mouth and like the close relation between the thunder that follows lightning, so came vomit. Induced by the putrid smell of rotting fish and salty sea water, I couldn’t hold myself together. My pink dress, soiled by the smelly rotten contents of my stomach, had seen much better days. Sweet swaying bales surrounding lone trees of trees with apples so red that any son of Adam would be tempted to eat it. I couldn’t recall the smell, but it was definitely beat the smell of fish.