Hello. I am very interested in this project. I am a graduate of Broadcast Communications with training in screenwriting and film production. I have also written some screenplays for short films that have been produced by my team and myself in our home city. I have also written creatively for certain projects in my university and I would very much like the chance to work with you.
What got me interested in this project is the fact that you specifically said that the story is more important than where the commas are placed. I, too, write this way, and I believe that the story should always come first.
If you need any samples, I would very much like to show them to you upon your request. You may reach me over Skype at a time convenient to you.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best Regards,
Carl Ivan Caballero