Hi there!
I see that you are looking for someone to help develop your children's story, and I think I would be a great fit for your project. I am a children's writer and editor as you can see from my profile. My specialty is in developmental editing, which it sounds like you are looking for. Someone to come alongside you to help develop your book more thoroughly. I am a Top 100 Children's eBook ghost writer on Amazon, a traditionally published middle grade writer, and an award-winning short story writer through Writer's Digest short story competition in 2015. Writing and editing children's books is my passion, and I have studied, and continue to do so, the children's book market in depth.
Also, because I am an editor, I can assure that anything I would help you would with would be edited and that the wording would flow well. I am currently available for work and would love to talk more with you about your book. Because I am new to Freelancer, I am willing to negotiate a lower price than I normally would. If you'd like, you can check out my website for the types of editing I do with authors: [login to view URL] Also, I would want to know how long your book is and what age category it is for?
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Shari Schwarz